Tuesday, 15 May 2012

Class critique/peer feedback

The questions I asked my classmates regarding my work so far were:

1.  Would the comic book look ok if it was A5?
2. Does anyone know any good places I could go to to print my comic book and posters?
3. Is there anything you would change

This is the feedback i got:

For the front cover keep abreviated version of title..so just H.V.O without it written out underneath - but i put it under so it would make sense as to what it stands for ...as this is the first issue people would need to know what h.v.o stands for ...but in later issues i would just use the abreviation because people should know by then what it stands for.

Front page cover - looks good flowy but make the V more sharp because it looks like a U

Paragraph page - get rid of red background...a bit too distracting

Add boxes for story - peers and teacher liked the way I wrote my epiphany page

Back cover - continue as front cover ( same design)

Can print at street print

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